Saturday, June 25, 2011

“The Watchers” Video Roundup

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Lausanne, Switzerland...

In the Lausanne Cathedral, Marc Rochat, a strange boy with a limp, watches over the city. He lives in a world of shadows and beforetimes and imaginary beings, waiting for the angel his mother told him he'd one day have to save.

Marc believes that angel is Katherine Taylor, a high-priced escort who is about to discover that her real-life fairy tale is too good to be true.

Meanwhile, Jay Harper wakes up one day with no memory of who he is, where he came from, or what he did before. Offered a job as a freelance security specialist for the International Olympic Committee, he has no choice but to accept. On the trail of a missing former hockey star, Harper crosses paths with Marc Rochat and Katherine Taylor, which he will discover is no coincidence.

Three lives. One purpose...

In support of the June 9, 2011 UK Hardcover publication of Jon Steele’s The Watchers (priced £12.99) via Bantam Press, Fantasy Book Critic hosted a series of videos that featured author Jon Steele discussing the different locations found in the book including Lake Geneva, LP’s Bar, Café Grutli, Escaliers du Marché, and Lausanne Cathedral. All seven videos are now included below, followed by a brief explanation from the author, Jon Steele:

The Watchers Video: Part One — Lake Geneva


“Lac Léman (Lake Geneva) is the soul of Lausanne. I know her moods and am deeply affected by them. She is never the same, from one hour to the next. Her currents move like ballet and the light that plays across her surface is sometimes blinding, sometimes grey . . . always reflecting the colours of the sky and the clouds like some impressionist painting. And when she is still, showing you the perfect upside-down sky in her mirror-like surface, conversations fall into whispers so as not to disturb her. I may not believe in God, but watching a thunderstorm roll in from the Alps and seeing her waves rise like watery hands trying to catch the bolts of lightening reaching down from the sky, is to know that I am part of something mysterious and beyond my comprehension. The lake is my muse . . . always calling me to her shores to her a story.”

The Watchers Video: Part Two — LP’s Bar


“I had done four straight months on the front lines of the Intifada for ITN in 2000. I was ordered to take time off and get away. A friend who ran the American Colony Hotel in Jerusalem, had a friend who ran a hotel in Lausanne. He told me, ‘I’m sending you to the Palace Hotel in Lausanne.’ A few days later I landed at Geneva, shell shocked and worn out. A limo was waiting and carried me to Lausanne. Afnan Taha (my partner in crime on the front line, and now wife) was with me. She began to cry because it was peaceful and green. We had rooms with views of the lake and stepping out on the balcony of my room for the first time, I cried too. After the dusty, tear-gassed, slaughterhouse world of the Intifada, Lausanne looked to be all that was left of paradise.

Down in LP’s Bar, I met people who would become friends and whose names I would blatantly steal as names of characters for the book. It is one of the great hotels and bars, run by one of the world’s great hôteliers. And everyone in it, from bartender to piano player kept me going with encouragement and love. And often refilled my glass at no charge whilst I sat at the bar scribbling way. I told them I was going to write a book set in Lausanne, they took it as a promise…and they never let me forget I had made it.”

The Watchers Video: Part Three — Café Grutli


“Café Grutli s a local place at the bottom of Escaliers du marché, the wood steps that climb the hill to Lausanne Cathedral. You can see the belfry from the café windows. When I first came to Lausanne to write The Watchers, I went there for dinner very often. The same people would come in every night and the owner of the café was a jolly sort who made a tour of the place, telling jokes and collecting plates. He still does.

I had started character sketches to the book, and as any writer can tell you, writing the first sentence of chapter one is tough. I had  tried a hundred times and ripped it up every time. I needed something to make the reader feel the curtain was rising on a strange and mysterious place. So, one dark and stormy night, I was in the café, finishing my dinner and working my way through many glasses of Swiss villette wine. Of a sudden, I realised the opening sentence of chapter one was staring me in the face. The faces, the conversations, the clatter of glasses and plates, the clouds of cigarette smoke floating above heads, the dark raining world outside. And I imagined Marc Rochat in the corner, like me, watching. I pulled out my notebook, I took a deep breath, and I wrote: Marc Rochat pulled aside the lace curtains and watched the rain fall through lamplight and fall onto the cobblestones of Escaliers du marché.”

The Watchers Video: Part Four—Escaliers du marché


No one is really sure when the covered stairs of Escaliers du Marché were first built. Written records date back to the 13th century of the Middle Ages, or as Marc Rochat would say, ‘Middles of Ages’ but historians are sure there have been steps since there was a cathedral. The wood steps follow the highest of the seven hills of Lausanne up from the centre of medieval Lausanne at Place de la Palud (very near the door of Café du Grütli), to very doors of Lausanne Cathedral.

Set along the oldest buildings of the town, Escaliers du Marché is much loved by les lausannois, me too. They have a magical feel about them that seem to transport a person back in time. I instilled that feeling with Rochat in the open of the story as he climbs the steps. The world seems to bend in the corner of Rochat’s eyes and he slips into the place he calls ‘beforetimes.’

And as an English speaker, I loved the sound of the words themselves; so much so that I end both the first sentence of chapter one, and the last sentence of the book with…Escaliers du Marché...

The Watchers Video: Part Five—Lausanne Cathedral (The Nave)


Growing up catholic, in the days of the Latin mass, I was a sucker for Gothic cathedrals. I mean just the word: “Gothic”. Cathedrak naves were designed to create the illusion of entering the kingdom of heaven, and I fell for it every time. Much of my young life I thought I would grow up to be a priest, and I would spend many hours before statues and crosses praying for an apparition...anything; a wink or a nod would do. It never happened. Then came sex and drugs and rock and roll, and that was that for me ever wanting to be a priest.

But I never lost the mystical feeling upon entering a Gothic cathedral. Many original Christian churches were built on pagan holy sites, much the way Christmas was tagged onto the pagan celebration of the Winter Solstice. This gave the early Christians a ready crowd, as pagans would come to mass not so much to come to Jesus, but because they believed in the holiness of the place.

Lausanne Cathedral is the site of one of the first Neolithic settlements in Europe; people who believed in many gods, and in life after death. And the entire cathedral sits atop hundreds of open graves with “ancient skeletons looking like seeds waiting to be reborn”, as Rochat describes them.

And as I wandered Lausanne Cathedral and the crypt, I came to believe—as Rochat and Harper came to believe (and what the pagans knew all along)—that the earth beneath the stones is sacred.

(NOTE: A picture of one of the skeletons can be found Jon Steele’s twitter page @beforetimes.)

The Watchers Video: Part Six—Lausanne Cathedral (Climbing the Belfry)


It was six years ago when I first learned of le guet de Lausanne, the man who calls the hour through the night from the belfry of the cathedral. A friend and I were coming from dinner and he pointed out the man with the lantern high in the tower, just after the eleven o’clock bells. He said, ‘You will never see this anywhere else in the world.’

Once, all Gothic cathedrals had such a man. He was one of the most important people in the town. He watched for fires and invaders approaching the medieval walls of the town. As the world developed cathedrals got rid of their ‘watchers,’ all except Lausanne. For nearly 800 years there has been a watcher in the belfry of Lausanne Cathedral every night without fail.

My friend knew le guet de Lausanne and telephoned the tower and said he wanted to bring ‘an American writer’ to meet him, and that we were bringing wine. (You want a late night invite in Switzerland, tell them you have wine. Works every time).

We arrived at the bottom of the belfry tower and my friend called up, ‘Renato!’  A few moments later this shadow of a man, in a black floppy hat, leaned through the railings. He waved and disappeared.

‘Where’d he go?’ I asked.
‘To get the key.’ my friend said.
‘Huh?’

Just then the shadow of a man in the black floppy hat reappeared and began to lower a key on a long line of string.

‘You must be kidding me.’ I said.
‘Welcome to Switzerland.’ my friend said.

The Watchers Video: Part Seven—Lausanne Cathedral (The Bells)


Early one Saturday morning, shortly after my first trip to the belfry tower, I received a call from Renato, le guet de Lausanne. He told me he had something very important to show me at 5:00 that evening. I said I had something on but Renato insisted, ‘I am very sure it is important for your book.’

We met at Café de l'Evêché in the shadow of the Cathedral. Renato was at a table, two beers at the ready. Renato, as he does, talked about all sorts of things, except why I was there. (there is a lot of Renato in Marc Rochat). We had one more beer and at 5:45PM, Renato said…‘Allors, on y va.’

He led me to the cathedral, he opened the tower door and we climbed the steps to the belfry. It was my first time in daylight in the tower and the view was breathtaking. And while I was admiring the view, Marie Madeleine, seven tons of bronze and the largest bell in the tower rang for 6:00PM. Then all the yokes began to sway and all the bells of Lausanne Cathedral began to roar. It was deafening, like listening to the Big Bang at the moment of creation. The bells rang for fifteen minutes, and the final chord seemed to hang over the world like some never-ending sound. Renato looked at me and said:

‘Will the bells help you with your book?’
‘Yup.’ I said.
‘I thought so.’

Winners of “The Watchers” Giveaway!!!

Congratulations to Jennifer Campbell (UK), Stuart Blakeley (Australia), Giada Mariani (Italy), Bobby Berry (Colorado), Christy Hawkes (Utah), Sue Rojo (New York), and Andrew Carter (UK) who were all randomly selected to win a SIGNED COPY of Jon Steele’s debut novel, “The Watchers”, courtesy of Bantam Press!!! “The Watchers” was released in the UK on June 9, 2011 and was reviewed by Fantasy Book Critic HERE.

Thursday, June 23, 2011

“Heaven’s Shadow” by David S. Goyer & Michael Cassutt (Reviewed by Robert Thompson)

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ABOUT DAVID S. GOYER: David S. Goyer is a screenwriter, film director and comic book writer. His filmography includes Dark City, Blade, Batman Begins and The Dark Knight. He is currently working on The Dark Knight Rises and the upcoming Superman film, Man of Steel. Heaven’s Shadow is his first novel.

ABOUT MICHAEL CASSUTT: Michael Cassutt is a television producer, screenwriter and author. His TV work includes The Outer Limits, Eerie, Indiana, Beverly Hills 90210, and The Twilight Zone. His novels includes The Star Country, Dragon Season, Missing Man, Red Moon and the non-fiction book, Who’s Who in Space.

PLOT SYNOPSIS: It was sighted three years ago in the southern sky. An object over one hundred kilometers across, originating from the Octans constellation, on a trajectory for our sun. As the Near-Earth Object—dubbed “Keanu”—approaches, two manned vehicles race through almost half a million kilometers of space to be the first to reach its surface: NASA’s Destiny, originally designed for flights to the Moon and Mars, and the untested lunar ship Brahma, representing the Russian-Indian-Brazilian Coalition.

But when the competing missions both arrive on the contested entity, they find that Keanu is much more than a simple rock hurtling through space. It has been sent toward Earth for a reason...

FORMAT/INFO: Heaven’s Shadow is 416 pages long divided over five titled Parts, with each Part further divided by unnumbered & untitled chapters that feature brief quotes or excerpts from message boards, press releases, interviews, etc. Also includes a Dramatis Personae and sketches of the Brahma and Destiny-Venture shuttles. Narration is in the third person via numerous characters including Destiny-7 commander Zack Stewart, his teenage daughter Rachel, Zack’s girlfriend and fellow astronaut Tea Nowinski, and Harley Drake. Heaven’s Shadow ends at a point that is satisfactory, but the book is the first volume in a trilogy which will be followed by Heaven’s War (July 2012) and Heaven’s Fall.

July 5, 2011 marks the North American Hardcover publication of Heaven’s Shadow via Ace Books. The UK version (see below) will be published on July 15, 2011 via Tor UK. US cover art is provided by James Paick. NOTE: Warner Bros. has acquired the rights to the trilogy with the film adaptation of Heaven’s Shadow to be written and directed David S. Goyer.

ANALYSIS: It’s safe to say that David S. Goyer has had a successful career as a screenwriter. The Dark Knight alone is one of the highest grossing films of all time—and a personal favorite. Unfortunately, Goyer has not fared nearly as well in television, comic books and as a movie director.  So when I heard about Heaven’s Shadow—David S. Goyer’s debut novel—I was instantly intrigued, but also a little wary. Thankfully, Heaven’s Shadow is worth the price of admission, delivering a blockbuster novel full of pulse-pounding thrills and epic fun. Throw in popcorn, soda and 3D glasses, and it’s almost like being at the movies.

Of course, Heaven’s Shadow is not a movie—at least not yet—it’s a book, and that’s where co-writer Michael Cassutt comes in. Besides having experience with television and screenwriting, Michael Cassutt has also written a number of novels, both fiction and non-fiction, as well as numerous short stories. That experience shows throughout Heaven’s Shadow in the form of crisp pacing, characters with engaging personalities and distinctive traits, accessible prose, and skillfully handled plotting highlighted by nearly non-stop tension and excitement. At the same time, characterization is not very in-depth—reminding me of characters you might find in a James Rollins or Michael Crichton novel—which is made worse by the large number of characters in the book, while the storytelling can be formulaic at times thanks to obvious foreshadowing—Yvonne’s personal preference kit (PPK)—and a Hollywood-like ending. That said, for a novel that is more commercial fiction than it is science fiction, Heaven’s Shadow is very well-written, especially when the book could have been nothing more than a glorified movie script.

Because of his writing experience, Michael Cassutt also possesses extensive knowledge regarding NASA and spaceflight, which is evident in the parts of Heaven’s Shadow that features NASA, astronauts, and other space-related applications. Science fiction elements meanwhile—including alien races (Architects, Sentries) and alien technology (Markers, the Factory, an environment that adapts to different species, etc.)—may be shallowly developed and familiar, especially for SF veterans, but it’s always exciting to see what new discoveries the crews of Destiny and Brahma uncover on Keanu. The highlight is a technology so far advanced that it seems like magic. This technology—which I won’t discuss in detail to prevent spoilers—is thought-provoking and provocative, and is the catalyst behind the best surprises and drama in the entire book. On the flipside, the purpose of the spacecraft is not revealed until the novel is almost over, but the sequels will no doubt cover this revelation—and the Reivers—in greater detail.

Overall, Heaven’s Shadow may favor style over substance, and the incomplete story may require commitment to a trilogy in order to reach the final payoff, but considering how much fun the book is to read, it’s hard to complain. In short, Heaven's Shadow is one of the most entertaining novels I've read this year, offering more bang for your buck than most big-budget movies that will be released this summer...

Wednesday, June 22, 2011

SPOTLIGHT: Book Country


Writing is a solitary practice, but revision requires feedback. Most aspiring authors send their manuscript to friends and family, others meet with a critique group, and some enroll in an MFA program.

In April 2011, Penguin Group USA launched Book Country, a website dedicated to genre fiction readers and writers. Focused on romance, fantasy, science fiction, mystery and thriller, Book Country helps new authors hone their craft as part of a genre fiction community.

Users upload their novels (or a portion of their novels) for peer review. Book Country’s unique genre map helps writers categorize their novels, and lets readers find books similar to ones they love, which they then read and provide detailed critiques. Book Country brings the peer feedback and community feel of a critique group, online.

Another key feature is discoverability. If you’re working on a novel, publishing professionals won’t see it until you begin sending out query letters. Book Country gives agents and editors a place to discover new talent; for this reason, many publishing professionals have already signed up. Book Country also allows avid readers and bloggers to discover budding talent and use their reading experience to offer helpful feedback.

As the world continues to shift online, Book Country creates a community that was once only available in metropolitan areas. Now, genre fiction authors all over the world can come together online to exchange feedback, engage in discussions, and have their work discovered.

For more information regarding Book Country, please view the Video Tutorial below or read the Official Press Release and FAQ:


OFFICIAL PRESS RELEASE:

On April 26, 2011, Book Country, LLC announced the public beta of a supportive genre fiction community that serves writers, readers and publishing professionals.

Focused on romance, fantasy, science fiction, thrillers, and mystery fiction purchases—which account for 58% of fiction purchases—Book Country is designed to help new authors hone their craft and get useful feedback on works in progress from avid readers and other writers. Book Country also offers publishing professionals such as agents and publishers a place to discover new voices.

Discoverability is a key component of the Book Country experience. Through great search and browse tools, including the groundbreaking Genre Map, visitors and members can find the books the books they love to read, from Police Procedurals to Medical Thrillers to Paranormal Romance, to Urban Fantasy or Steampunk.

Book Country is focused on building a community that is—and will remain—a free, creative supportive venue where writers and readers can give and receive constructive criticism, discover new and entertaining books, discuss and share tips and experiences, and learn about the publishing industry. Badges will be awarded to members to recognize a variety of achievements including most-improved books, top-rated peer reviewers, and most-active discussion contributors.

“We created Book Country because while writing and publishing sites have proliferated in recent years, none were designed by publishing experts to create a more valuable pathway forward for new writers,” explained Book Country President Molly Barton. “Book Country is egalitarian and merit-based, while fostering an atmosphere of encouragement and creativity.”

Members can upload a work in progress, explore and provide feedback on books already posted, participate in discussions about the business and craft of writing, or learn more on the industry blog. A writer new to the site can upload their work immediately, but because Book Country was designed with genuine reciprocity in mind, before that work becomes visible on the site, she or he must review three other people's work.

Book Country is a subsidiary of Penguin Group USA, a Pearson company. Though owned by Penguin Group USA, Book Country is a separate entity, both legally and practically with fulltime Book Country staff members. Books from all publishing houses will be mentioned on the site, and staff members from all publishers are welcome to participate. Book Country is focused on the success, education and enjoyment of its members.

BOOK COUNTRY FAQ:

What is Book Country?
Book Country is creative, supportive online community where readers and writers of genre fiction can come together read works in progress, post original fiction, comment on the work of their peers, participate in online discussions and increase their name recognition.

What defines “genre fiction”?
“Genre fiction” describes the way novels or short story collections with similar themes, settings, tropes, and character types are categorized. Book Country focuses on romance, mystery, thriller, science fiction, and fantasy.

Will you be adding additional genres? What about Young Adult?
Book Country is focused on specific genres, and is not designed to be all things to all writers. Over time, we may add additional genres and literary forms based on feedback from the community. Young Adult fiction that falls into one of our focus genres is welcome at Book Country.

Will Book Country offer self-publishing services? When?
Right now, Book Country is focused on building the community. Later this year, we will be adding self-publishing services. We are not outsourcing these services.

Will editors and agents read Book Country manuscripts?
Many editors and agents are members of Book Country and read the uploaded content. It is not, however, an outlet for submission to agencies and publishing houses.

What steps has Book Country taken to prevent plagiarism?
Protecting the uploaded work is of the utmost importance, and Book Country has taken numerous steps to make it very difficult for someone to copy or distribute writers’ material, including disabling “copy and paste” and “print” functionality within the reader.

Do you allow books with explicit material?
Yes, of course. We respect writers’ creative choices when it comes to their posted manuscripts and books. We do, however, request that they tag their work accordingly and we have some suggestions in our terms of use and community guidelines sections. In addition, we have a way for members to report inappropriate content throughout the site.

What is Book Country’s relationship to Penguin?
Book Country, LLC is a subsidiary of Penguin Group USA, a Pearson company. Book Country is a separate legal entity with full-time Book Country staff.

Tuesday, June 21, 2011

“Miserere: An Autumn Tale” by Teresa Frohock (Reviewed by Robert Thompson)

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AUTHOR INFORMATION: Raised in a small town, Teresa Frohock learned to escape to other worlds through the fiction collection at her local library. Miserere: An Autumn Tale is her debut novel.

PLOT SUMMARY: Exiled Katharos Lucian Negru deserted his lover in Hell in exchange for saving his twin sister’s soul, but Catarina doesn't want salvation. She wants Lucian to help her fulfill her dark covenant with the Fallen Angel Mastema by using Lucian’s power to open the Hell Gates. Catarina intends to lead the Fallen's hordes out of Hell and into the parallel dimension of Woerld, Heaven's frontline of defense between Earth and Hell.

When Lucian refuses to help his sister, she imprisons and cripples him. After sixteen years living with the pain and guilt of what he did, Lucian is finally offered a second chance when a Katharos spy helps him escape from his sister’s clutches. During his flight from Catarina’s soldiers, Lucian comes across a foundling trapped in Hell. To save her, Lucian must open a Hell Gate, violating the terms of his Ban, which is punishable by death.

Now, not only must Lucian evade Catarina's wrath while trying to protect an inexperienced foundling, but he is also being hunted by Rachael, the lover he betrayed and abandoned in Hell, who is dying from a demonic possession and seeks retribution...

FORMAT/INFO: Miserere: An Autumn Tale is 350 pages long divided over three Parts and twenty-one numbered/titled chapters. Narration is in the third-person, mostly via Lucian Negru and Rachael Boucher, while other POVs include Lucian’s twin sister Catarina, the foundling Lindsay Richardson, and Lucian’s Elder John Shea. Miserere: An Autumn Tale ends at a satisfying stopping point, but is the first book of the Katharoi, which will have at least two more sequels: Dolorosa: A Winter's Dream (Book 2) and Bellum Dei: Blood of the Lambs (Book 3). July 2011 marks the Trade Paperback publication of Miserere: An Autumn Tale via Night Shade. The lovely cover art is provided by Michael C. Hayes.

ANALYSIS: Teresa Frohock’s impressive debut, Miserere: An Autumn Tale, takes the concept of characters passing from the real world into another world—think The Chronicles of Narnia and Alice In Wonderland, both of which are referenced in the novel—and sets it in the middle of an ages-old war between Heaven and Hell. In this war, Hell is a prison where its inhabitants, the Fallen, seek their freedom so they can return to Heaven. In order to accomplish this though, the Fallen must first conquer Woerld, a dimension that exists between Hell and Earth, with Earth the gateway to Heaven.

Defending Woerld from the Fallen are the Katharoi, warrior-prophets blessed with the ability to perform talents such as healing, telekinesis and commanding Hell Gates by channeling God’s spirit. Katharoi are originally from Earth. As children, those who are deemed worthy by the Celestial Court to defend Woerld from the Fallen, are allowed passage through the Crimson Veil which shields Earth from Woerld. There, foundlings are raised by Elders, who teach the foundlings how to control their abilities and the ways of a Katharos.

Into this setup, Miserere: An Autumn Tale revolves around four main characters: Lucian Negru, an exiled Katharos who abandoned Rachael, the woman he loved, to save the soul of his twin sister Catarina sixteen years ago; Lindsay Richardson, a 12-year-old foundling from present day Earth who bonds with Lucian as her Elder; Rachael Boucher—a Katharos Judge suffering from the possession of a demon called Wyrm—who has been tasked with hunting down Lucian, her ex-lover and betrayer; and Lucian’s twin sister Catarina, a former Katharos who now serves the demon Mastema and seeks to use Lucian’s powers to free the Fallen.

Between these four characters, Miserere: An Autumn Tale plays out like a Shakespearean drama because of the intense emotional turmoil that exists among the foursome. There’s the love that Lucian and Rachael once shared, the guilt & sorrow that Lucian feels for his betrayal and Rachael’s anger & pain for being betrayed, and the feelings they still harbor for one another. Then there’s the complicated love/hate relationship between the twins, with Lucian torn between his oath to always protect Catarina, his despair at what his sister has become, and his feelings for Rachael, while Catarina struggles between her twisted love for Lucian and her desire for power, which she will obtain by any means necessary, even if it means giving up her soul. Finally, there’s the special bond that develops between Lucian and the foundling Lindsay, a relationship that draws numerous parallels to the tragic events that occurred sixteen years before between Lucian, Rachael and Catarina; and serves as a key element in Lucian’s absolution—a reference to the novel’s title, Miserere, which is Latin for “have mercy”—Rachel’s deliverance, and Catarina’s just reward. Of course, all of this emotional drama would mean nothing if the characters were not convincingly written, highly sympathetic, and, in the case of Lucian, Rachael and Lindsay, extremely likable.

That said, it’s a good thing that Lucian, Rachael, Lindsay, Catarina and their drama are the focal point of Miserere: An Autumn Tale, because the rest of the novel doesn’t measure up to the same standards. For starters, Teresa Frohock’s world-building lacks depth, especially when it comes to describing Hell and the various places introduced in Woerld (Hadra, the Wastelands, Ierusal, the Citadel). Also, while I understood many of the rules governing Woerld and the Katharoi, the book still left me with several questions: Does time move differently in Woerld because Lindsay Richardson is a 12-year-old foundling from present-day Earth, while Lucian came from the 13th century, but is only forty years old? If the Fallen can only escape from Hell through Hell Gates, why are Katharoi born with the ability to open Hell Gates? Are the inhabitants of Woerld all originally from Earth, or were people there before the Katharoi arrived? Can Katharoi procreate, and if so, are their children born with the powers of a Katharos? If the Crimson Veil only opens for children on Earth, and only allows passage into Woerld, how do the Fallen plan on crossing the Veil into Earth? And so on...

Speaking of Woerld, supposedly every religion on Earth is represented through one of Woerld’s many bastions, with the different religions working together and respecting one another. Unfortunately, readers never really get to see this ideal world in action because the novel is primarily dominated by Christianity, which was a little disappointing considering the interesting potential this concept offered. On the plus side, Miserere: An Autumn Tale never gets preachy or heavy-handed, despite the novel’s emphasis on religion.

Moving on, Teresa Frohock’s writing in Miserere: An Autumn Tale may be accessible and emotive, but it’s also plain and unsophisticated—“The land surrounding her was flat with rock formations jutting out of the darkness. In the distance, mountains lined the horizon, and a volcano belched smoke and fire into the sky.”—which made it feel like I was reading a YA novel. Personally, I have nothing against YA fiction if that’s what the author was trying to accomplish, except Miserere: An Autumn Tale would occasionally venture into territory that bordered on dark fantasy and horror—torture, rape, the Simulacrum, demonic possession, the Sacra Rosa, profanity, etc.—which jarred uncomfortably with the book’s YA sensibilities. The YA-like writing also extends to the story, including shallowly developed subplots—traitors within the Citadel’s Katharoi—and predictable plot twists, not to mention a fairy-tale ending that dampened some of the emotional drama that came before. Lastly, as much as I loved the characters in Miserere: An Autumn Tale, I felt the author focused too much on Lucian and Rachael, in the process undermining Catarina and Lindsay, while the tragic events between Lucian, Rachael and Catarina sixteen years ago could have been explained in better detail.

In spite of these various issues, Miserere: An Autumn Tale remains an impressive and entertaining debut, led by an interesting concept in Woerld and the Katharoi, great characters, and compelling drama. So even though Teresa Frohock’s craft has plenty of room for improvement, I look forward to experiencing the author’s growth and development in the Katharoi sequels...